Thursday, August 20, 2009

Angela's Revenge...

Please see Bumight’s post for the background to this…



I closed my eyes and reclined further on the chair. The lights were out, and once again, I was back in the house with Tunde. I was no longer the timid dowdy young woman he had forcefully had sex with. I was a worldly wise young woman who had been crossed, a lioness whose cub had been killed by a lesser creature. I was angry.

I had just come out of the bathroom, and found him sleeping soundly on the coach. In that moment I was seized by a murderous rage, such as I’d never known before.
I couldn’t bear to see him sleeping there so soundly, after he’d just taken my most prized possession away from me so unceremoniously. The bastard didn’t even have the decency to lie to me that he loved me, or something. He was sleeping! And snoring lightly…

I turned on my heel and went straight into the kitchen. The first thing I saw was a fork; a strong, three-pronged kitchen fork. The kind that is used in turning plantain while frying. I seized it and went back to the sitting room.

He was still sleeping. Without his pants.

For a brief moment, I felt a different kind of hurt: that a man had sex with me and he was so soundly asleep a few minutes after. Had he found me so uninteresting? A quickly as it had come, the thought was replaced by a greater anger.

I raised the fork in my right hand and put my left on his testicles. They felt soft. He stirred gently in his wicked sleep.
Biting my lower lip, I brought down the fork on the taut part created by my left hand pulling his balls. Hard! The three prongs penetrated, and he screamed!!! He woke up in shock. I drew out my right hand with the fork and bits of flesh clinging to it. He opened his mouth to let out another scream. With perfect timing I plunged the fork into his mouth.

He didn’t see it coming, and by the time he closed his mouth the fork was already in it. With part of his balls on it, and a lot of blood. He choked, sputtered, and I’m sure, wished he could faint.
But no, his eyes turned to me in horror and he opened his mouth to say something. But he could not. The pain I saw on his face gave me joy. Such joy as I have never ever known before……

32 comments:

RocNaija said...

Sounds like someone just might get done for pre-meditated first degree murder..

Can't spin this off as self defence..

leggy said...

na wa oh...gross.

Quaggar said...

Obara Jesus![Shudders... instinctively crossing legs]

bumight said...

o...k!
*shuddering as i read this*
I wouldnt wish to be Tunde right now!
That was so real though. i almost felt tunde's pain!

im going to put a link to this continuation on my page. good work :)

LG said...

*film trick*

omoge how u'

SHE said...

@ Roc: Murder? No, we won't kill him. But if he "mistakenly" dies...


@Leggy: He deserved it, no?


@Quaggar: *smiles*


@Bumight: No, It would be very uncomfortable indeed to be Tunde.

Thanks for the rights to do a sequel.


@LG: You get it m'lady.

I'm ok. Thanks

Woomie O! said...

for the love of balls!!!
so scary...
and dark...

BSNC said...

lord have mercy..lol. tunde got served literally...

Chari said...

*shudders*

*grabs crotch*

lawd of mercy! I was not made for ish like this! *scampers back to the sweet and fiery blogspace*

Buttercup said...

Shit!

~Sirius~ said...

he he he he

I would do this in my head mhen!

Fluffycutething said...

AH AH AH!!!

This revenge is a bit too dramatic oh biko.... LOL

CaramelD said...

Ohhhhhhhh dark and very nasty.

c_u_o said...

Good gravy! I second Quaggar.

Myne Whitman said...

Ouch!

But very good writing. I could see it all and feel it oo.

Great but nasty. Never liked gory horror. Eeshhshiver...

Tigeress said...

I dont see revenge here- What i see here is a crazy ass chic who shld be charged for GBH (greviously bodily harm).

pink-satin said...

i was squirming as i read this....

The punishment befits the crime

anyone who forcefully sleeps with someone deserves evil.......

i wish every bastard who ever raped anyone would go through this 100x over...

latishababy said...

like leggy i want to say gross

but since i have friends who have been raped and i have been attacked and harassed sexually too, i have to say that there is a certain avaricious pleasure that comes from causing him pain.

cos he caused a girl pain and went to sleep like he had just finished eating dodo and rice (a regular occurence) how dare he?

vengeance is actually sweet
but when its reality
God says vengeance is mine
its not easy but i had to learn
with trusting God to take vengeance for me

Beautiful post
even though i was jumping off my sit at the shock that would be on his face but when i think of the girl, i really don't know.

NoLimit said...

LOL @ all the squirming guys!
Personally I'll say it serves him right ( a taste of his own medicine is not a bad idea!!!)
But then...vengeance is mine says the Lord!!!

THIRTY + said...

Ok, I think I must have issues 'cos that was some good stuff for Tunde right there...sorry but darn he deserved it.

Although vengenance is the Lord's sha but father forgive me because I could so do that to any gunner that tries that with my daughter.

Dammy said...

So vivid, that I had to hold my balls while reading this!!!

As much as I don't approve of what Tunde did, I don't think anyone deserves such treatment.


Thanks God it's 100% fiction!

Jide Salu said...

Excellent piece...

Phoenix said...

LMAO @ Quaggers reaction, Nice one babes,extreemly graphic but i like!! if only all the rape tales ended like this....,

SOLOMONSYDELLE said...

oh wow....

very well written though!

doll said...

disturbing

SOLOMONSYDELLE said...

babe, do update...

Afrobabe said...

Dammm…that major madness…

Nice work babes

sonofphilip said...

very catchy story,forced me to go thru some of ur other post and ...you do have a way with words...

will definitely be back

Myne Whitman said...

Helllooo, anybody home? Echoooo...


LOL, see your update soon and have a nice week.

TinTin said...

argggghhhhh!! painful! lol

SOLOMONSYDELLE said...

na wa oh, how many times do I have to beg for you to come back?

All these bloggers going MIA...hmph...

TinTin said...

Again i say Jesu Christi...painful!!

update ohhh!!

lol